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deanobruce - 05 April 2012 05:28 AM
lanox - 05 April 2012 05:14 AM

deano i send u pm

literally running out the door, will read when i get home (i realise in the time it took me to write this i could have read it but yeh…)

No problem was regarding ur question for slx boots.

 
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Cool comp I will most likely be another one voting for you guys. Good luck with the vids!

 
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Oh this IS real?
My Bad, I thought it was a joke for sure. It even said april fools on the picture!
Good luck to those entering it.
I’m sure we have some pretty strong candidates on here wink

 
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Let me know when I can vote for you guys!

 
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So today I put a little effort toward making a 30sec vid for this comp.

I haven’t submitted it yet.
Can you guys check it out, let me know what you think, how do I come across? (honestly) and suggest any changes I should make. Remembering I’ve already filled the entire 30 sec (it’s 31s actually). It took an hour or so with sorting through my footage and trimming it to fit - there is plenty of footage I wanted to use but didn’t want to spend time hunting it down.

 
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will have a squizz when i get home and give you some feedback

 
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Great spaz!

I think it is a little too busy in the centre (where there is heaps on screen) and maybe a little too quiet in the beginning. I think you speak a fraction slow in the beginning, i feel it is painfully slow! But maybe thats cause i know you IRL and know its your performance voice? Rather than recording it again is it easy to speed up a little?

Ultimately i like it but you asked for honest feedback!

The last section with the 3 split screens is perfect!

 
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Yep oz, it’s my performance voice. I’m also dosed up on cold meds and was sweating with fever so was compensating for it.
That’s why I’m asking BW opinions - to see if should re shoot. Re shooting isn’t a problem, I did about 20 takes anyway! and it’s easy to drop it into the timeline.

 
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If others agree I don’t think you need to re shoot! Can’t you speed it up a fraction? Worried if you do another take you will speak too fast. You know how hard it is!

 
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Your ‘voice’ is fine BTW way i like it (i can see your training in it! LOL)  it is just really slow!

 
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The first two lines are slow because I’m being clear on the lines they want

Make sure your video includes:
Hi my name is {your name}, and I want to be Perisher’s Ultimate Skibum.

I guess it’s the difference between my scripted and natural performance voice wink

 
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spaz - 18 April 2012 07:34 AM

The first two lines are slow because I’m being clear on the lines they want

Make sure your video includes:
Hi my name is {your name}, and I want to be Perisher’s Ultimate Skibum.

I guess it’s the difference between my scripted and natural performance voice wink

Yeah I understand - it just doesn’t set a very good pace IMO.

But hey maybe no one else agrees grin

 
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I think its great spaz. Good luck buddy shaka

 
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just had a look at it, i cant pick anything you really need to change.
Go for it mate!

 
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Yeah man thought it was great! Maybe throw in a little quiet background music that fades away with the vid at the end or something? Just a thought grin